Here is the opening of Shadow Walking. The setting is a few years on from the Prologue. Hope you enjoy :)
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Flame
Silence enshrouded the heavily
fortified castle surrounded by a fifty foot high wall. All entrances were
sealed tight, the main double doors made of ten inch thick wood. Every window
was hidden behind thick steel shutters allowing no means of entry to the
building.
The castle was impenetrable…with
the exception of one miniscule area in the window nearest the double doors.
A stray tendril of sunlight slipped
through a chink in the steel shutter guarding the window. As the sun blazed
high in the bright blue sky, the faint hint of a breeze blew through the
courtyard and drifted towards the chink carrying with it a scarlet red mist.
The mist swirled gently and wafted
inside breaching the impregnable fortress. Somewhere deep within the dark
bowels of the castle something stirred in response instantly on alert.
The mist hovered for an instant and
then slowly coalesced into shape, taking on the human form of a tall female
with mahogany coloured hair laced liberally with dark red streaks. She stood
frozen on the spot as her shape formed. The slow rise and fall of her chest the
only movement she made.
Flame stood within the huge
entrance hallway, allowing her dark gaze to become accustomed to the gloomy
interior. There was a soft glow of light which was good because her night
vision wasn’t as advanced as the inhabitants of the castle. It was better than
most of her kind though, one of her special abilities.
Once her eyes adjusted she was able
to view the interior quite easily. The entranceway was grand, bordering on ostentatious,
but then vampires were all about beautiful possessions, or so she’d been told.
They saw it as a mark of their power, their vanity so colossal it was
laughable. She had expected the castle of the Crown Prince to be the most
lavish just because of his status, but this really was over the top.
Her gaze travelled the marble
staircase leading upwards, black steps with no balustrade to prevent a fall.
They appeared to be suspended in thin air but she knew there was some type of
support somewhere, she just couldn’t see it from the angle she was standing.
Just the sight of it was enough to
make her stomach flip over, her vertigo kicking in with a vengeance. Flame knew
it was ridiculous to be afraid of heights. Her brain told her that daily, and
yet, she’d never been able to overcome the silly fear she’d had since
childhood.
Dragging her gaze from the
staircase she methodically continued her examination of the room, taking in the
ornate chandelier hanging from the high ceiling. It had to be the hugest thing
she’d ever seen, full of dangling crystals of all shapes and sizes. It took her
a moment to realise she was looking at diamonds and not crystals.
‘That
figures.’
Flame continued her perusal
managing to hold in a snort of amusement. She didn’t expect the vampires to be awake
with them being nightwalkers and it being high noon. But a few of them were day
walkers, Día Volar. Or so the legends of her people said.
Flame was new to her position,
barely five years into her apprenticeship as a Shadow Walker. She’d been educated
regarding the other species of her world but there wasn’t really much to be
told as it had been so long since they’d interacted. She was almost certain
that the day walking vampires couldn't be real, but it paid to be alert none-the-less.
Letting out a short puff of air,
she shifted her position infinitesimally. Her short tenure as a Shadow Walker,
and suspension of belief that the Día Volar existed, was possibly why she was
currently standing in the heart of the vampire stronghold. Her mother had
always warned her she had far too much curiosity for her own good.
This had seemed like a good idea at
the time but now Flame was reconsidering her actions. If there were Día Volar
within the castle then she’d be in big trouble if they caught her invading
their territory.
Still, she couldn’t bring herself
to leave. The chink in the shutter had taken her months to find. With the
vampires’ aversion to sunlight at paranoia level, it would quickly be repaired
and this opportunity to breach their defences wouldn’t come again any time
soon.
Flame was determined to gather as
much information as possible to take back to her brethren.
Shifting her position again she could
now make out the razor thin wires supporting each level of the staircase.
Whatever material was being used must have been incredibly strong to allow
passage up the steps. It was hard not to be impressed by the craftsmanship.
Feeling time was slipping past too quickly;
she finished orientating herself, consigning images to her mind of the white
marble walls and floor tiles, the rich vein of gold threading through them and
decorating each lintel of the rooms leading off from the hallway.
‘Yup,
ostentatious with a capital O. Foolish people.’
Shaking her head, Flame moved
properly for the first time, silently flowing towards the nearest room so she
could explore further. Her movements were unhurried, displaying an inner grace
she was oblivious to.
Flame had no concept of how the
world viewed her, of how her family and friends had before the Directorate had
tested her and changed her life completely. She was still so new to this life
that it hurt to think back on her past, of all the loved ones she’d had to
sacrifice to join the Shadow Walkers.
Sometimes late at night, she’d
return home, hiding in the shadows and watching her parents and siblings move
on with their lives believing her dead. Those were the times she often
questioned the ultimate decision she'd made. To leave her old life behind and
become dead to all who’d loved her. Not that she’d really had much choice in
the matter. One didn't say no to the Directorate.
But watching her mother silently
weeping over the image of her 'dead' daughter was too much to bear and on those
nights Flame would cry silently with her, desperate to tell her mama the truth
but unable to. Those visits always broke her heart but she found herself unable
to stop, desperate to cling onto the past and all she'd lost.
Clio inevitably knew when she’d
visited her family. Her mentor said nothing but Flame was aware she was being
granted an adjustment period and one day soon Clio would have words with her
about the visits. For the moment, the other Shadow Walker appeared to
understand and held her peace. Possibly Clio had had the same reaction when she
was chosen to this life.
Shaking off the misery which was
starting to invade her soul, Flame stood in the open doorway allowing her gaze
to follow the sleek lines of the furniture in what appeared to be a dining hall
of some kind. She’d barely begun her perusal when her inner radar suddenly
screamed an alert and she spun around, dropping to a crouch to survey the entrance
hall through narrowed eyes.
Nothing seemed untoward. The
entranceway appeared exactly as it had been when she’d entered but something
was warning her that she was no longer alone. Was there a Día Volar in the
castle? Did they truly exist?
Magic pulse deep within her as
Flame drew on the heat of the earth’s core. Fire raced within her veins, the
heat coalescing in her midriff awaiting a target. The red streaks in her hair
appeared brighter, her irises bleeding from dark, chocolate brown to marbled
flames.
Though she couldn’t see anyone,
Flame knew she was no longer alone in the room. There had to be a Día Volar present. Where they were she had no idea. He
or she appeared skilled at camouflaging their presence. She remained tense,
struggling not to allow fear to get the better of her.
‘Mama,
you always said I’d land myself in serious trouble one day. I guess you were
right about that.’
Étienne
Étienne sensed the intruder the
instant she entered the castle. High up within the rotten rafters of the dank
dungeon, he stretched his wings out slowly, tilting his head to the side as he
listened for sounds above. His brown, gold-tipped feathers barely created a
sound as he poised in alert mode, tracking the intruder.
Even in his eagle form his sense of
smell was acute as was his hearing. The female above was good at remaining
still but he could hear her heartbeat and scent the acrid stench of fear which
was roiling from her in waves. Whoever had breached their defences at least had
the good sense to be afraid, even if she lacked any basic intelligence.
That was evident in her penetrating
the inner sanctum of the vampire Crown Prince. Only a fool who courted death
would be this stupid. And Étienne had no qualms about being the executioner. It
was what he was and all he could remember ever knowing.
Flapping his wings, he launched
himself from the rafter he was perched on, and flew silently towards the source
of the intrusion, intrigued by this unexpected turn of events.
It was his turn to protect Crown
Prince Tobiah. Nicandro; his fellow Shadow Walker, was off doing the Gods only
knew what. They rotated a watch over their ruler though they bore him no real
allegiance or love. He was an acceptable leader and astute enough to have
surrounded himself with adjutants with the right amount of power to enrich his
own. He was also adept at increasing his
wealth to a level that surpassed most of their kind.
It wasn’t part of the Shadow
Walkers remit to protect Tobiah, but Étienne and Nicandro chose the task to
maintain the current political landscape. It was working to their benefit so it
seemed prudent to maintain the status quo.
It was usually a boring, thankless
task which was why this incursion sparked Étienne’s curiosity enough that he
opted not to go in for the kill immediately. Instead he perched high in the
shadows of the entranceway to observe the intruder.
She was tall for a female; even if
some of that height was attributed to the rather fetching black boots she was
wearing with wicked looking heels. They increased her height to almost six
feet, which was unusual to see as Tobiah had a penchant for smaller, more
delicate creatures gracing his castle.
The female before him didn’t look
the least bit delicate even though she was a tad on the slim side for his
personal tastes. He preferred more curves and a bit more breasts, nicely
rounded hips to hold onto as he took his pleasure.
Étienne’s wandering thoughts caught
him off guard and one of his wings ruffled minutely as he brought himself up
short. It was an inconsequential movement and yet the female appeared to sense
something, dropping down into a crouch, clearly on the defensive.
He sensed the rise in magic, being attuned
to the arts though not a wielder in any way. Most of his kind had long lost any
ability to use magic though some of their basic abilities were of a magical
nature. His eagle eyes closed for a bare fraction of a second as a slight
tingle shivered through him and he worked to overcome his surprise.
'An
Artisan?'
He was actually struggling to absorb
that there was an Artisan in the castle. He wasn't used to being surprised,
having lived so long. Not only was she a magic user she was also a very
powerful one judging from his reaction to her drawing on the elements.
The last Artisan Étienne had come
across had been centuries ago along one of the borders. A fellow Shadow Walker
called Hunter. Étienne had been tracking a vampire who'd succumbed to bloodlust
and was attacking anyone and everyone. His chase had taken him to the border
and the vampire had been so lost in his hunger he'd crossed over the line.
The tall Artisan had appeared from
nowhere in an instant. Without uttering a word he had taken out the vampire
with what appeared to be a sword made from the sharpest and thinnest ice
Étienne had ever seen. One second the vampire was running and the next his head
was rolling back over the invisible boundary line.
Étienne had stayed on his side of
the border, watching the Artisan warily for his next move. The man was built
like a well-honed athlete with short hair cropped close to his skull in a hue
so white it appeared unnatural. Pale blue eyes met his for the briefest of
moments and a smile slowly curved hard lips.
"Hunter," the Artisan had
said quietly and for a moment Étienne had thought he was addressing him with a
title. Then he realised that the male was introducing himself, recognising they
were brethren in some form by the nature of their positions.
Mildly surprised at being addressed
by another species, Étienne had responded with a cool nod, his grey eyes
shrewd. "Étienne." His gaze had returned to the dead vampire as he
finished speaking.
"You should have run faster,
Étienne. It's your own fault that we now have access to one of your kind."
It was hard to argue with the
statement. If he had moved quicker the Artisans wouldn't now be able to perform
experiments on vampire physiology from the remains lying on the other side of
the border. Nicandro would be angry as would Tobiah.
A moment's silence passed and then
Hunter stepped back moving towards the tree line close by. "Retrieve him
quickly, vampire." With that the Artisan disappeared and after a second's
hesitation, Étienne decided to take him at his word and used his enhanced speed
to cross the boundary and take back what belonged to him.
He half expected Hunter to return
and braced for the tingle to go down his spine which would warn him magic was
being conjured. But the Artisan did not return and he safely retrieved the
fallen vampire and made it back across the border with no interference.
That had been the last time he'd
come in contact with an Artisan. Now he viewed another, only this time it was
in his domain. He had always wondered at Hunter's lack of ruthlessness during
their encounter. He would not have been as generous had their roles been
reversed, as he was not about to be generous in this encounter.
The female Artisan had breached the
inner sanctum of the vampire nation. Though the air crackled with energy and he
watched chocolate eyes bleed to red marble signalling the magic in use was
fire, he could sense the youth of the female and knew she was no match for one
his age. No matter how strong her magic.
The penalty for an attack on the
Crown Prince was instant death. Étienne had delayed too long as it was because
his curiosity was piqued by the incursion. It was time to do his job, protect
the Crown Prince at all costs.
He swooped from the rafters, his
wings stretching to their full 7 foot span as he glided towards his target,
wicked talons at the ready...
Hmm, from cliffhangers like that you'll indeed get a fear of heights.
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I am a little confused by the different names and terms in the world of the Shadow Walker. If you could make these details more lucid, that would be perfect. Overall, love the suspense and characters so far. I can't wait for the development of the Shadow Walker/Artisan and Etienne.
ReplyDeleteDANGIT Jazzykins! I almost fell of that cliff hanger! I mean seriously... *sigh* I almost screeched out loud in disbelieving frustration. LOL!! This story is gonna be a joy to read.
ReplyDeleteYou continually prove that you are an amazing author. I'm so excited to read something new and fresh from your imagination! (altought I adore/love/am obsessed with the FTI series hehehe)I cannot wait for the rest of this story!!
<3 you much my dear!
those cliffhangers of you!!! dang it!
ReplyDeletecurious about this hunter dude now too. he must have some moral code for him to let Étiene take back the vampire he killed.
I love your work!This is amazing!!! Are you going to post more chapters or do you intend to publish it? Can't wait for the next update!!
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