Here is chapter two of Shadow Walking. This story is certainly in 1st draft and isn't edited in any way. I hope you enjoy it and please feel free to leave a comment on how you think it's progressing :)
Introductions
The Golden Eagle appeared from
nowhere. One moment Flame was tensed, trying to find the object of her unease,
and the next there was a huge bird of prey sweeping from the high ceiling,
amber eyes glowing with intent as it bore downwards.
The speed the bird moved told her
it wasn’t a normal avian. She had barely enough time to register the dark brown
wings tipped with veins of gold before she was shooting off a volley of flames
and rolling through the doorway into the dining hall. It was a moment's
reprieve as she heard the eagle shriek its displeasure.
Día
Volar! It had to be. No other vampire would be awake at this time and there
was no way in hell the vamps would have any guardians that were not of their
kind. Flame was disconcerted at meeting up with what she’d previously
considered a legend, but knew she didn’t have time to marvel over it. This Día Volar was intent on killing her and
she’d have to use all her wits to escape the situation.
She was already mentally incanting,
drawing the heat of the earth faster and a bit too deeply for comfort. Clio was
always warning her about channelling too much power but she figured, in these
circumstances, too much was better than not enough.
*****
Étienne managed to avoid the ball
of flame shot at him with relative ease. The Artisan hadn’t really targeted too
well being more concerned about diving to safety into the dining hall. He let
out an irritated shriek even as his form began to shimmer and he dove to the
ground.
He landed in a crouch on booted
feet, uncurling his large body in one fluid movement and rising to his full 6
foot 5 inches in an instant. Another instant was all it took for his grey eyes
to track the fireball and watch it connect harmlessly against the marble tiled
wall. It scorched the tile but the material wasn’t flammable so the flame
extinguished quickly.
He had to stop the woman from
shooting out flames and quickly. The dining hall wasn’t as flameproof with the
tables being rich cedar wood and the chairs sumptuously cushioned. If a fire
started in the castle it would be disastrous. He wouldn’t be able to secure the
sleeping vampires to locations safe from the sunlight, which meant he had to
think of another way of dealing with things.
“Witch!” He hadn’t meant it to be
maligning of her species whom he knew had a fierce pride and detested the
misnomer, but his hissed out word certainly achieved a reaction from the
female.
“Oh, you did not just call me that!” The soft
voice had a hard edge, disbelief echoing from the words. “Artisan, you ignorant
blood drinker! We are Artisans!”
Flame was so incensed by the
vampire’s word she paused in the gathering of her power and waited to see what
his next move was going to be. She couldn’t believe he’d just called her a
Witch. She’d have been less outraged if he’d called her a murderer. It was the
biggest insult anyone could give her.
Her response made Étienne’s lip
curl slightly. “Believe me I didn’t mean it in that connotation. Artisan,” he
countered dryly, moving to stand against the wall he knew she was hiding
behind. He moved so silently he was certain she wouldn’t be aware he was so
close with just the wall separating them.
“Do you have any idea how expensive
that marble is?” he asked, trying to keep her off-balance as he scanned the
wall seeking her heat signature. With the amount of power she was holding onto
to it should help him to determine exactly where she was.
Flame ignored his question,
frowning as his words hit home and his voice appeared to slide over her skin
like a gentle caress. It was deep and rich, and completely intoxicating the way
the words rumbled from his lips. The timbre of his voice was entirely at odds
with his words.
He was angry she’d shot flames at
him? He’d been attacking her! Of course she was going to defend herself. If
that burnt his precious castle then who was he to call people names?
Flame didn’t know why she was
feeling so offended by his words. It didn’t make sense that she was experiencing
such anger when she needed to have a cool head and analyse the situation to
enable her to escape.
She shook her head trying to clear the
unnatural thoughts from her mind. Realisation dawned and she let out a startled
gasp. The sneaky bastard! He was inside her head!
Even as she thought it, the wall
suddenly erupted and two strong arms wrapped around her body and heaved her
through the destroyed bricks and drywall. She had time to let out a startled
yelp and then she was pinned to an undamaged section of the wall, long fingers
gripping her throat. She stared up into the greyest eyes she’d ever seen and
knew she was looking at death.
*****
Étienne had surprised the Artisan
so much that the tingle of gathered power evaporated and he knew she’d let go
of her magic. He pinned the female easily to the wall by the throat, using his
lower body to keep her trapped for his perusal.
She was no beauty…well not in comparison
to his women. Female vampires were artfully beautiful, classically so with no
imperfections. This female was pretty enough but she had a small scar over her
left eyebrow which detracted from her pale, clear skin. There was a second thin
scar which ran from just behind her left ear and along her jaw line, almost
reaching her chin.
If it hadn’t been for those scars
she would have come close to matching the beauty of his kind. Her skin was
flawless apart from them, her eyes a deep chocolate brown with tiny flecks of
green around the pupils. Her lips were full and enticing, her cheekbones high
and defined.
He surveyed her objectively, taking
in her apparent youth. Artisans could conceal their years just as easily as any
other race but he had a feeling this female was young. She appeared to be in
her mid twenties and the ease with which he’d captured her seemed to support
that.
She had to be a Shadow Walker. No
ordinary Artisan would have managed to breach the borders so easily. Whilst he
didn’t go out of his way to terminate other Shadow Walkers unless threatened,
he had no qualms about executing this one. She had invaded the vampires’ inner
sanctum. Death was the only punishment.
“Foolish little girl,” he sighed
tightening his grip on her throat and applying pressure. He watched her eyes
widen as she began to struggle in his grasp.
Her body rubbed against his and he
felt his loins stir at the feminine contact. He blinked once, surprised that
his body reacted to hers. His involuntary reaction caused the Artisan to still,
her eyes widening in surprise.
She tried to say something but it
came out in a choked sound. Étienne loosened his grip on her throat enough to
hear what she was saying.
“Get off me, you perverted animal!”
The unexpected shriek was so not
what he expected to hear that he snorted out a laugh. Seriously, the stupid
female was worried about her virtue when he was about to take her head off? It
was so ridiculous it was hard not to laugh.
He threw his head back and laughed
loudly and then realised his mistake. The instant he did, the female’s knee
connected between his legs and he let out a grunt of pain, releasing the
hellion in his surprise.
His skin tingled and he threw
himself into the dining room, his supernatural speed making him appear to
vanish in the blink of an eye. He felt the rush of heat whoosh past him
singeing the arm of his shirt an instant before he felt a burst of pain in his
arm.
*****
Flame knew it was pure luck she’d
hit the vampire. She hadn’t even been aiming at him, more desperate to get away
than anything else. She heard a grunt of pain but she was already incanting her
spell as she streaked towards the chink in the steel shutter.
The air moved behind her and she
knew he was coming back at her, using his deadly speed to trap her before she
could escape. She had precious little time and she didn’t waste a second of it.
Her body shimmered just as she felt the vampire’s cold breath on her neck and
then she vanished into red mist, swirling through the opening and into the noon
sky.
Étienne grunted in surprise when
the Artisan vanished. The burn on his arm was already healing, his regenerative
powers kicking in quickly. He’d had worse injuries over the years, so the minor
burn hadn’t even slowed him down.
He was almost on top of her when he
felt his skin tingle again and then the hellion was gone in a haze of red mist.
He tracked the mist escaping through the damaged shutter. ‘So that’s how she got in!’
He made a mental note to ensure all
shutters were checked and repaired as soon as darkness fell but now he was in
quandary. The castle had a weakness and others could enter the same way the
female had. If he chased her he would be leaving the Crown Prince unguarded and
it was hours before sunset.
But if he let the witch get away
she would be able to give away the location of the seat of power of the vampire
nation and the Gods only knew what else she’d managed to glean from her short
time in the castle. He was damned if he did and damned if he didn’t.
Étienne was pulling open the front
door and securing it behind him before he’d realised he’d made a decision. He
told himself it had nothing to do with his pride that he’d decided to catch the
Artisan and execute her. It was simply more dangerous for her to share her
knowledge than it was likely that another Artisan would enter the castle while
he was away.
He secured the door and cast his
grey gaze upwards. She had a head start on him but his enhanced eyesight made
it easy to track her. He took off at a run, shape-shifting into his Golden
Eagle form as he did, catching a thermal and spinning up high into the sky.
Powerful wings beat upon the air as he quickly began to gain on the faint red
mist before him.
Pursuit
He was behind her, she knew he was.
Not only that, he was gaining fast. The
huge eagle would overtake her soon and then what? He couldn’t touch her in mist
form but he could get in her way keeping her from the boundary line. She’d tire
soon and have to revert to her normal form and then she’d be at his mercy…or
lack of mercy.
Buggeration! Why had she let
curiosity get the better of her? ‘Because
you think you’re invincible?’ a little voice whispered in her head. Her
mama had been right. It brought little comfort now but at least she could admit
it before she was ripped to pieces by a pissed-off vamp.
Flame considered trying to find
somewhere to hide but knew the vampire wouldn’t give up. He’d simply wait her
out and either way she’d most likely end up dead. Her only option was to keep
going and hope she could stay in mist form until she reached the border
separating their lands.
*****
Étienne was on top of the mist
before she got too far ahead of him. He was rather impressed with her ability
though his eagle form was obviously the superior mode of travel. Still, she
could get through smaller spaces in her alternate form. That would be a handy
skill to have.
He swooped down, barring the
forward motion of the mist and screeching his satisfaction as she had to shift
direction to try and go around him. He quickly outflanked her, getting in her
way once more.
There was something rather
exhilarating about sparring with the Artisan. Étienne found he was enjoying
blocking her path and imagining how frustrated she was getting at being balked
at reaching her goal.
He knew if she crossed the boundary
he’d have to let her go. He didn’t intend to lose this one though. She was his
and nothing she could do would prevent him from detaching her pretty little
head from her body.
His eagle relished the hunt as did
his vampiric nature. There was nothing quite like tracking prey and closing in
for the kill. The harder…the better. It made for great sport and he was up for
great sport.
Maybe he would have a little taste
of the Artisan before he killed her? Just the thought of tasting her blood made
his hunger grow sharply. It had been almost a week since his last good meal.
He’d only snacked the last few days at the closest Farm. He preferred his food
not to be dripping in fear.
Étienne detested the Farms though
he conceded the need for them. With so many of his kind refusing to feed others
because of the power they had to share, Farming was the only way to keep his
people in the supply of blood they needed to survive.
And it made the Adjutants very
wealthy, not to mention the Crown Prince. Farming served a dual purpose for the
Vampire Nation and his disgust at the shivering wretches in them was negated by
that need.
The Artisan changed course abruptly
and dived downwards towards some trees. He watched the red mist vanish into a
crack in a large trunk and hovered above waiting to see where she would appear
next.
*****
Flame was tiring and needed to
rest. She was close to the border but not close enough. Sighting a hiding
place, she slithered into the crack of a large tree trunk and took a moment to
gather her thoughts. She knew the vampire was above waiting for her to come
back out. The question was could she find some way of exiting without being
seen?
Pretty soon she was going to have
to release her spell. She’d used up too much of her strength, first crossing
into the vampires’ lair, and now escaping. Usually she could hold mist form for
as long as required but that was without an enormous eagle forcing her to
change direction every two seconds.
Drifting slowly within the trunk,
she spied what she thought could be an escape route. It was low to the ground
and under the canopy of the branches. If she could sneak through, and stay low,
then she should be able to make a fair distance before the vampire realised
she’d slipped the net.
Praying to all the Gods she could
think of, Flame slipped through the crack in the bark and skimmed the forest
floor trying to stay beneath the branches. She listened for sounds of pursuit
but the air above her was silent.
Finally something was going her
way! She would have laughed if she had the capability in her alternate state.
As it was, all she could do was keep putting distance between herself and the
stupid Día Volar waiting for her to appear miles away.
Her strength was waning and she
knew she was going to have to revert to human form soon. The invisible border
was now less than a mile away. She could run fast but not as fast as a vampire
could move. Would she make it in time?
The air shimmered and Flame rose to
her full height. She raced from the cover of the trees, hearing the shriek of
the eagle as it sighted her and took up pursuit. The final mile looked like it
was a hundred miles. The thunder of swooping wings crashed on the afternoon air
as she sprinted for the border.
She wasn’t going to make it! The
air burned in her lungs as her strength waned further and the noise of wings
grew louder. What a screw-up she was as a Shadow Walker. Killed by a bloody
vampire because she had more courage than sense!
Flame ran knowing she was out of
luck, tensing as she did, and waiting for the razor sharp claws of the eagle to
shred her to pieces.
*****
Étienne sighted the Artisan the
instant she appeared from the trees. For a fraction of a second he was startled
that she’d eluded him so easily and then he soared after her. He could see she
was tired and had no hope of making the boundary line. Success was in his grasp
and his hunting instincts kicked in granting him more speed. Not that he needed
more but the urge to sink his fangs into the woman fleeing him was dominating
his thoughts.
From the moment he’d considered
feeding from her, the urge had become a rampant need that surged through him
like a wildfire. He wanted her blood and he’d have it. There was no escape for
her.
Something glinted in his peripheral
vision and he had but a moment to swerve before a thin lance of ice whistled
past where he’d been. Surprised by this
new turn of events, his large wings banked to the left and he saw the shape of
a man standing within the tree line across the border.
Hunter.
He should have expected he’d cross
paths with the other Shadow Walker one day but he was still surprised to see
him. Shrieking his irritation, Étienne shifted shape as he swooped to the
ground, coming to land just on his side of the invisible boundary line.
The Artisan was lying panting on
the grass, not three feet away from him, her chest heaving with the strain of
her escape. She was so close and yet a million miles away.
“Well met, Étienne,” the tall,
white-haired Shadow Walker called as he walked towards the woman. He stared
down at her for a moment and then rolled his eyes in exasperation. “Thank you
for escorting this child home.”
“This child is mine to punish,” Étienne ground out through clenched
teeth. He was furious at being thwarted, his hunger gnawing at him. His eyes
glowed red, his fangs beginning to sharpen and elongate as his gaze remained
riveted on the woman before him.
“Such a harsh punishment you have
in mind for one so young and impetuous,” Hunter countered quietly, pale blue
eyes watching alertly for any sign of movement from the vampire. “Has the blood
lust overcome you, old adversary?”
To be accused of succumbing to
blood lust stung Étienne as nothing else could. Only immature vampires lost
control in such a manner. The other Shadow Walker’s words had the desired
effect, snapping him out of the haze of need engulfing him and he took a deep
breath, retracting his fangs and pushing back his hunger.
“She trespassed on the Crown
Prince’s castle, Hunter. The penalty is death, no matter how young and
impetuous she may be!”
“Come and get me, Étienne,” Flame goaded, rolling over
onto her stomach before pushing herself up to her knees. She was amazed she’d
made it to safety and was feeling confident now there was another of her kind
beside her.
“Hush, child, before I decide to
let him have you.”
She looked up at the ice man and
scowled. She had no idea who this Hunter was but it was evident that he was an
Artisan and a Shadow Walker. Why he would side with a vampire she had no idea.
Hunter turned to look back at
Étienne, his expression serene. “The last time we met I returned what belonged
to you. This time I keep what belongs to me. A fair trade, don’t you agree?”
Frustrated, Étienne glared at the
woman. He couldn’t cross the border or he’d break one of their oldest treaties.
And he couldn’t deny that Hunter had allowed him to retrieve his vampire all
those years ago. But that paled in comparison to the fact this witch had been
inside Tobiah’s castle.
For the second time that day he was
damned if he did and damned if he didn’t. And all because of the woman staring
up at him with smug laughter in her eyes. How he wished he could slit her
throat and watch as that laughter turned to stunned shock as the life slowly
bled from her body.
With a frustrated hiss he bared his
fangs at her, the ends of his fingers curling into talons. He let his
transformation take over his features, knowing it was probably the first time
she’d seen a vampire convert. From the surprise in her eyes and the way she
scooted backwards, he took some small satisfaction that the view of his ridged
brow and dripping fangs frightened her.
Étienne pointed one gnarled finger
at the woman, his eyes glowing red with menace. “The next time we meet I will
disembowel you, witch. I will do it slowly ensuring I keep you alive for the
maximum amount of time. I will rip you open with my teeth and feast on your
insides as you scream for mercy.”
*****
Flame swallowed hard, both repulsed
and fascinated by the creature in front of her. In full vampiric state, Étienne
wasn’t as attractive to look at, in fact, he was downright ugly. She wondered
idly if he mated while in full vampire mode. Imagine waking up next to that!
“Charming,” she quipped back,
rising to her feet. “Does that usually work on girls because quite frankly it’s
leaving me a bit cold?”
She didn’t know what she expected
his response to be but when he threw his head back and laughed she took another
step back. There was clearly something not wholly right about this vampire’s
mind. Maybe Día Volar were all insane and that was a trade-off for being able
to walk in sunlight?
Étienne’s gaze turned to Hunter as
he let go of his vampiric side and reverted to normal. “Take good care of your,
child, Shadow Walker. She has been marked for death and is stupid enough to
feel brave because she eluded me once. She will not do so again. Heed my words
well.”
He spun and shimmered in the air, soaring
high in his eagle form, before swooping back towards the castle.
Hunter watched him go for a moment,
and then turned to peruse the woman at his side. He groaned inwardly at the
exultant expression on her face. So this was what the Shadow Walkers were
coming to? Children who had more bravery than sense?
“Who holds your leash, child?”
Flame bristled, shooting a dirty
look in his direction. “No one holds my leash
and I am not a child! Who are you anyway? And why are you friends with a
vampire?” Her tone was suspicious as her expression changed to mirror it.
Hunter rolled his eyes again and
leaned forward casting a quick incantation. He straightened and turned back
towards the surrounding forest.
“Run home to Clio, child, and
ensure you recount everything that’s happened today. I will be sure to ask when
I see her next. Should she be oblivious to today’s events you will wish for the
Día Volar’s tender mercies over mine.”
Flame gaped at him as he vanished.
He’d just threatened her! She was a Shadow Walker just as he. He had no right
to threaten her! Standing there on her
own she tried to imagine what Clio would have to say about the current events.
Her mentor wouldn’t be very happy and an unhappy Clio meant hours of lecturing.
Maybe she could…no the look in
Hunter’s eyes had made it clear he would ask Clio the next time he met with
her. There was no escaping the fact she’d have to relate the day’s events to
her mentor.
Sighing, Flame turned in the
direction of home knowing the next few days were going to be very trying
indeed.
more, that's all there is to it!
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